Ladies, did I mess this up ?? please help, its important?

i think this letter is really sweet but there are some parts that are kinda pushy like the answer my calls part...that was kinda mean...if you know she's busy then call her once and see when she gets back to you. i like how you tell her that she's one in a million and you keep it real 100% w/ only her,but also the other parts of that like when your teling her to not let what ever anyone says dont let them get her down; the intention is sweet, but it was little too forward and kinda drawn out..longer then needed. you know? i think you should have just maybe said dont let anyone get you down or tell you you aren't good enough, cause you are..and then leave it at that...so my final answer is it depends on how she balances out the sweet and too forward parts...im saying 50/50 chance